i was in a very poetic mo0d yest. i did 2 poems (not great at all) but one has yet to be completed. hanis kept askin whad i was doin (thru our phone chat) and i kept sayin that im doin de poem. he mentioned "still haven't finish?" thrice. yup, thats how slow i am to create 4 stanzas.

Dear Boyfriend

dear boyfriend, i love you so
with you i'd rather be
dear boyfriend, i love you so
do wanna marry me?

i said that unwarily
as though i've got no shame
all i want is you assuring me
that this ain't a game

i felt so much better
after you said, "believe me..
my love for you won't deter..
even if you leave me...''

i gave him a kiss after that
to let him know how i felt
for my love was echoed back
and that, his heart was whad i held

and ive just completed another poem (de one that i had mentioned earlier on). was dozin off last night, towards de end.

Pain and Hatred

pain and hatred
i felt for you
pain and hatred
you tore me in two

pain and hatred
i felt that day
pain and hatred
when you left me astray

pain and hatred
i felt for months
pain and hatred
forget you - i cant!

pain and hatred
turned into love
as the cause of hurt
was a test from Above

pain and hatred
no longer felt
pain and hatred
the feeling melt

pain and hatred
was just a past
pain and hatred
that didnt last

well, this particular poem was supposed to be my feelings during de breakup period. i gues in a way i felt it this way.

and i have one last one. this was done for quite sometime and it has been in my hp ever since. not sure whether i had bloggd it or not either.

Lucky

i read past smses
and i felt in great masses
de joy of loving you
has brought me through

through fears and hopes
your smile and jokes
reminds me each day
that im lucky... you stay

this one is short because it was done thru sms. and also bcoz i was damn slow at that time.


but hanis told me that it doesnt matter that its very simple or sound stupid (children's poem).

as long as it was done from de heart.



p/s: i will update about de dancewerks competition soon.